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Post by Toz76 on Aug 29, 2015 14:09:56 GMT -5
This is where I will post drafts of 3WSR Book 2 (as yet untitled). When it's finished, I'll copy-paste it to the main Fanfiction board.
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Post by Biblically Accurate Angel on Aug 29, 2015 14:51:27 GMT -5
Great! Best of luck to you!
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Post by Toz76 on Sept 6, 2015 17:54:34 GMT -5
This story picks up directly after the first, and deals with recent events in 3WSR without Woman In Blue. The tentative title is "For Want of a Nail".
Chapter 1)
Man In Blue stood over the corpse of woman In Blue, crying. He knew that she would have wanted him to go out and avenge her, but he couldn't. He collapsed on the floor, sobbing.
Man In White, Silver, and Gold looked on.
"Come on, let's take him to his room."
---------------- That night was the night of the visitors from the alternate timeline. While the Colormenfought and beat the Neo-Colormen, the High Colorwomen stood guard.
"Did you hear that?" Asked Woman In Silver.
"Yeah, I did." Said Woman In White. "Let's check it out."
The three Colorwomen ran into the Great Hall to see a massive head hovering in the room. Man In White quickly called all nearby colorfolk to the room.
Together, they combined their power into a large beam and pointed it at the head. The energy field dissipated, and the head fled, along with Man In Off-White, leaving the Shear, Ghost White, and Woman In Pink unconscious on the floor.
"Well that's done- hey, where's the Prism?"
"Bachmann Edward's gone, too!"
Meanwhile, the bulk of the Colorfolk had been trapped in the 8th dimension with the giant monkey man. You see, in the original timeline, Woman In Blue thought the sound was nothing, so they stayed at their post, so the others were in position to catch Man In Baby Blue and Man In Black, preventing the alternate timeline from happening. But now, things had gone from bad to worse.
And this was just the beginning.
----------- Well, that's chapter 1, draft 1. I think I should add a recap of the events that had occured in 3WSR up to the place where the time split becomes relevant, but I'm not sure.
Don't worry, the ending will most likely be much lighter- although I'm undecided on just where to go. Thoughts?
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Post by Biblically Accurate Angel on Sept 6, 2015 18:40:47 GMT -5
A great job so far! A suggestion: Put the ending in the middle of some critical moment; that way, it's easier for the next person to start the next book. But however way you do it, I'm sure it'll be great.
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Post by Biblically Accurate Angel on Nov 15, 2015 21:17:11 GMT -5
Any new ideas for the other chapters?
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Post by Tug on Nov 15, 2015 22:34:25 GMT -5
I was thinking of writing one on the Man in Steel's backstory, or during that two week time period before the Third Battle of Sodor where D-11 tries to rebuild his image after the Diesel 5000 XXX bridge scandal.
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Post by Biblically Accurate Angel on Nov 16, 2015 9:54:24 GMT -5
*It's Diesel 5000 XL.
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Post by Toz76 on Nov 19, 2015 10:06:57 GMT -5
I kind of want to go a different direction with this one. What was Man In Blacks motive for killing Woman In Blue? I also want to work on Man In Pink's backstory, but since this is non-canon...
Wait. I have a great idea. This is the universe the Alternate-Dimension Colorfolk are from! Man In Black is part of a small group of Vigilantes Ending Crisis... (VEC...) and is trying to stop them from killing every dimension's Diesel 11.
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Post by Biblically Accurate Angel on Nov 19, 2015 10:30:29 GMT -5
Both of those ideas sound great, Toz!
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Post by frankthetriviaman on Nov 19, 2015 11:59:43 GMT -5
Just a slight correction though- the eighth dimension is home to the little monkey man. The giant monkey man is in the ninth.
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Post by Toz76 on Nov 19, 2015 19:51:56 GMT -5
I always get those mixed up.
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Post by Tug on Nov 19, 2015 20:04:06 GMT -5
So should we rewrite the 3WSR Books then?
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Post by frankthetriviaman on Nov 19, 2015 20:15:38 GMT -5
No, that's just a small typo, easily fixable.
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Post by Biblically Accurate Angel on Nov 19, 2015 21:42:07 GMT -5
And I didn't even have it in my book!
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