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Post by Tug on Sept 12, 2015 14:48:50 GMT -5
Hey guys this is a fanfic I'm working on for the ttte forums that I wanted to ask you guys for some help with. The basic plot is it's the middle of the summer when Gordon
gets a crack his Steam Value. James then takes him to the Steamworks, while mocking him about the situation along the way, to get him mended, and convinces STH that he
can take Gordon's Express while he's being repaired. So James takes the express on the most crowded day of the year, and it turns out to be to heavy for him. So he carries
on anyway, but later bursts his steam value from the weight and pressure. Gordon's crack has been fixed so he's sent to get James and the Express. Gordon taunts James
with situation and is able to get everyone to where they need to go on time. James later asked for forgiveness from Gordon, and they make up in the End. I have the basic
plot, so I'm asking you guys to help me come up with dialogue and any other things you see wrong with the plot. Your help will be appreciated!
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Post by Biblically Accurate Angel on Sept 13, 2015 15:38:59 GMT -5
Sounds good; I'll think on it.
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