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Post by Biblically Accurate Angel on Aug 24, 2015 16:44:49 GMT -5
3WSR Book #1 The Murder Written by Diesel 11
PrologueIt was a cold night, and the Steam Team found it hard to sleep. Thomas and Percy were chatting quietly. The others were just trying to fall asleep. Thomas and Percy kept talking of things. They were doing it quietly, but the others were being bothered by it. James finally had it. "For pity's sake, you two, stop talking! We're all trying to get some slee-" Suddenly the shed door flung open. Man In Blue burst in. "Oh, you must help us! Woman In Blue has been viciously murdered!"
*** This is the beginning of a story that will thrill you to your core. This is the beginning of a story that will make you want to be a character yourself. This is the beginning of...
The Three Word Story Revolution Books
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Post by frankthetriviaman on Aug 24, 2015 17:18:36 GMT -5
Hmm... an interesting concept. Is this going to be a separate canon?
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Post by Toz76 on Aug 24, 2015 19:32:34 GMT -5
Hey, remember when TGC tried to kill Woman In Blue off? This kind of reminds me of that... Looking forward to seeing where this goes!
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Post by Biblically Accurate Angel on Aug 24, 2015 20:55:22 GMT -5
Thanks guys! This is actually the first in a series of books, but the series has a twist! To find out, wait until the end of this book...
But thanks for the feedback. To answer your question, Frank, this is not entirely seperate, but you needn't worry about WIB.
Next chapter coming soon!
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Post by frankthetriviaman on Aug 24, 2015 21:00:45 GMT -5
Ok, good; because remember, the colormen are morally good, and are more likely to purify their evil brothers than outright kill them.
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Post by Biblically Accurate Angel on Aug 25, 2015 9:04:06 GMT -5
Chapter 1 - STH Is Given A Surprise โExcuse me, Sir, you are wanted on the telephone.โ โBother that telephone!โ
STH was caught completely off guard with what he heard. He quickly got in the car, and rushed off to the crime scene. When he arrived, he raced to the body. The Colorfolk, TGC, Toz, Diesel 11(user), and Frank were already there. โWhat happened?โ he asked. โWhat does it look like happened?โ said Woman In Pink. โWoman In Blue has been murdered!โ Diesel 11 shook hands with STH and said, โThereโs nothing I can do here. Iโll contact Sherlock Holmes and ask him to come down. Iโll see you later.โ STH was most surprised. โSherlock Holmes? He knows Sherlock Holmes?โ โYes,โ said TGC. โWhy, then I must get the Island ready for when he arrives!โ And with that, STH ran to his car, hopped in, and drove away. โWell if that doesnโt take the biscuit!โ said Man In Silver.
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Post by Biblically Accurate Angel on Aug 25, 2015 11:17:33 GMT -5
Chapter 2 - Calling Sherlock Holmes When Diesel 11 (user) arrived at the Dieselworks, which was his home, he parked the car, and strode in. Diesel 12 was resting, but Diesel 11 wasnโt. โWhatโs been going on?โ he said. โWell, one of the Colorwomen has been murdered.โ โWhich one?โ asked Diesels 12, whoโd just woken up. โWoman In Blue.โ โOh, her,โ said Diesel 10, whoโd just rolled in. โYes, and now I must call Sherlock Holmes,โ said Diesel 11 (user).
Diesel 11 (user) went to the phone. He quickly placed in a call to 221B Baker Street, London, England. Mrs. Hudson, Sherlock Holmesโs landlord, answered the phone. โWho is it?โ โThis is Diesel 11. I would like to speak with Mr. Holmes.โ โJust a minute.โ A minute laterโฆ โYes?โ โHello, Sherlock, itโs me, Diesel 11.โ โD11! Good to hear from you! How are you?โ โIโm fine, and you?โ โGood, good. So, did you hear aboutโฆโ [Endless chatter of non-related things] โโฆyes, it was good. Anyway, the reason I called was because one of the colorwomen, whom you no doubt still remember, was murdered.โ โYes, I remember them. Who was it?โ โWoman In Blue.โ โMy, my. Interesting. Iโll come down immediately.โ โWill you be bringing John?โ โWatson? Yes, definitely!โ โThen Iโll see you soon!โ โGoodbye!โ
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Post by Biblically Accurate Angel on Aug 25, 2015 12:07:46 GMT -5
Chapter 3 - STH Is Given The Chance To Impress STH was very nervous when he heard that Sherlock Holmes was coming. โOh, I must get the engines ready. And my house is a mess! Oh, my, my!โ He went here, there, and everywhere. He had his servants totally redecorate the house. He did everything he could to make it look nice. Just then he heard a knock on the door. It was TGC, going to give him some brownies for STHโs dinner. STH shooed him away. โIโve got no time for this,โ he said, and banged the door. TGC walked off, laughing. โHe always does this when someone comes to Sodor,โ he said to Toz later. โRemember when the Queen came?โ Toz had to laugh.
STH gathered up the engines. โSherlock Holmes is coming, and you all must be one your best behavior!โ โChillax, ST,โ said James. โItโs not like he hasnโt been here before.โ โDo you mean to say that he has?โ โYes,โ said Thomas. โRemember when I lost the coal truck.โ STH was speechless!
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Post by Biblically Accurate Angel on Aug 25, 2015 12:28:41 GMT -5
Chapter 4 - Sherlock Holmes Arrives STH was pacing the platform. Sherlock Holmes was arriving now in Flying Scotsman. โOh, I do hope heโll be fine with the Island!โ STH was so nervous that he took out one of the brownies TGC had left with him and started eating it. Just then he heard a whistle. โOh, heโs coming!โ he said with a full mouth. He quickly swallowed, turned, and saw Flying Scotsman roll in. Moments later, Sherlock Holmes exited the train. โHello, Mr. Holmes,โ said STH. โItโs my pleasure to have you.โ โYou must be The Fat Controller,โ said Sherlock Holmes. (STH frowned.) โIโm happy to be back here. Itโs so nice and peacefulโฆ oh, yes, here comes Watson.โ โA pleasure to have you,โ said STH to Watson. โNow, may I tempt you with some lunch?โ
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Post by Biblically Accurate Angel on Aug 25, 2015 12:41:51 GMT -5
Chapter 5 - Lunch Diesel 11 (user) entered the McDonaldโs. He instantly saw STH with Holmes and Watson in line. Sherlock had a sort of disgusted look on his face, while STH was smiling like a bank robber. โSherlock!โ Diesel 11 called. The crowd looked at Sherlock in surprise. Holmes, however, only saw Diesel 11. He and Watson walked over. โGreat to see you again!โ said Watson. โIndeed!โ said Holmes. โJohn, Sherlock, itโs been a while,โ said D11. โYes it has,โ said Holmes. โNow I think we should explain to STH over there,โ said D11.
STH had already ordered the food (a Quarter Pounder, Big Mac, and Filet-O-Fish for himself, and two southwestern salads, one for Holmes, the other for Watson) despite him being confused with the other threeโs friendliness with each other. He took a seat and greedily set in as the others walked up and sat down. โYouโre probably wondering how we know each other so well,โ said Diesel 11. โIndeed,โ said STH between a bite. โYou see,โ said Watson, โthe three of us went to college together.โ โInter*chew*esting*chew*,โ said/ate STH. โAfter school, you probably know, I went into detective work,โ said Holmes. โI helped him out while setting up my medical practice,โ said Watson. โAnd I became a multi-trillionaire through stocks and websites,โ said D11.
While STH ate, the others talked about certain things here and there, and soon they were done. Leaving the restaurant, they made there way to the crime scene.
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Post by frankthetriviaman on Aug 25, 2015 13:10:24 GMT -5
Good story so far, but there's a smal plot hole
In the first 3wsr, we said there were no McDonalds on Sodor
("wait! There are no McDonalds on Sodor! What's going on here?!"). But that was before you joined the forum, so I just wanted to let you know that.
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Post by Toz76 on Aug 25, 2015 13:17:07 GMT -5
They could have been built since then.
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Post by Biblically Accurate Angel on Aug 25, 2015 13:17:24 GMT -5
Chapter 6 - A Talk At Tidmouth Sheds The Numbered Diesels were bored. They hadnโt had anything to do, so they decided to go to Tidmouth Sheds. Thomas and Percy saw them arrive. โWhat are you doing here?โ they asked. โWeโve got nothing better to do,โ said Diesel 11. โWhat have you been up to.โ โWell, Woman In Blue was murdered,โ said Thomas. โWe heard. Diesel 11 (user) brought Sherlock Holmes here.โ โAnd STH has been going nuts about him,โ said Thomas. โRight,โ said Diesel 12. โI heard he pushed TGC right out the door!โ โI remember when the Queen arrived,โ said Thomas. โOh, yes,โ said Gordon. โHe raced up and down to get everything ready.โ โAnd she stayed for only one night!โ said Percy. โAh, well,โ said Duck, โhe does things the Great Western wayโฆโ โStuff and nonsense!โ said James. โHe just likes to impress!โ The engines talked for a good while longer. Meanwhile, Holmes, Watson, STH, and Diesel 11 (user) were at the crime scene.
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Post by Biblically Accurate Angel on Aug 25, 2015 13:18:54 GMT -5
Re: McDonald's Yes, they were built since then.
This book is almost finished: only 2 more chapters to go!
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Post by Biblically Accurate Angel on Aug 25, 2015 13:39:20 GMT -5
Chapter 7 - Sherlock Holmes Takes A Look Man In Blue was guarding the body. After all, he had feelings for his colorwoman counterpart, and he felt as if his heart was broken. He ran up to Sherlock Holmes. โYouโve come at last!โ he said. โWill you please take a look?โ Holmes nodded. He took out a magnifying glass and examined the body, and everything around it. Man In Blue was impatient. โWill he ever finish?โ he asked. โHe takes his time and makes a very thorough look,โ said Watson. The time ticked byโฆ
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Post by Biblically Accurate Angel on Aug 25, 2015 13:42:32 GMT -5
One more chapter! Here it comes...
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Post by Biblically Accurate Angel on Aug 25, 2015 13:49:01 GMT -5
Chapter 8 - Sherlock Holmesโs Deduction Finally Holmes got up. He walked back over. โIโve got a question,โ he said. โWho was the last one to see her before she was murdered?โ โI did,โ said Man In Blue. โHmm.โ Sherlock Holmes looked around some more. Then he came back. โThe person who killed her isโฆโ โWho?โ Sherlock Holmes paused, then said: โMan In Black.โ
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Post by Biblically Accurate Angel on Aug 25, 2015 13:51:35 GMT -5
And that wraps it all up! I hope you liked it! Now, I said that there was a twist to the series. Well, just like the game Three Word Story Revolution, this series isn't just for me to write; anyone can! If you want to write the next book, feel free! (This'll give me a chance to work on some more fanfiction. )
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Post by frankthetriviaman on Aug 25, 2015 14:04:51 GMT -5
Not a whole chapter, but here's a sort of epilogue:
Man in black was sleeping in his apartment, when suddenly he was awakened
"For Shame, William, for shame. You inherit great power and blatantly decide to use it for selfish gain. No wonder the spirit will not let you have the Javelin black."
"Who is there! Show yourself!" He declared. Then the spirit appeared before him. "I started this bloodline on the right path; why did things have to go so wrong."
Now man in black was terrified "Arthur Blackson?!"
"My own flesh and blood." He replied "you will pay severely for your actions!"
"What are you going to do to me? Make me colorblind? Man in blue already did that!" Man in black said.
"No, I've got something else in mind." Arthur declared as the room filled with mist "be warned; the prism will never let a colormen or woman die in cold blood. She will return, so I swear!" Arthur disappeared, leaving man in black alone again.
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Man in blue stood over the silent body of his female counterpart.
"I wish there was more time, I wish I had been able to tell you, but I...I..."
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Post by Toz76 on Aug 25, 2015 14:06:07 GMT -5
Really now... I'll start plotting then!
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