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Post by frankthetriviaman on Jan 5, 2016 17:51:36 GMT -5
I fixed the story; when I reread it I realized some things didn't sound quite right and other bits I needed to go a bit more in depth with; let me know what you guys think.
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Post by Biblically Accurate Angel on Jan 5, 2016 19:28:14 GMT -5
Looks good! What was wrong with it, though?
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Post by frankthetriviaman on Jan 5, 2016 19:45:03 GMT -5
Mostly minor things; some sentences not worded quite right, a couple things that needed elaboration, that kind of thing.
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Post by Biblically Accurate Angel on Jan 8, 2016 22:24:08 GMT -5
What about the story Doc and I were working on? If it's in a 3WSR novel then how can our sequel fit in? Frank and I have been talking about the sequel lately, and frankly, I don't feel led to write it, and neither does Frank. It's more of a stand-alone story, and there's an underlying theme here โ frankly, if I used the same exact story in the novel, it wouldn't really work, I'd have to rewrite it, and while it's possible it might surface in there, for the moment, there are no plans for a sequel to it. However, I am curious as to what you two have in mind, Admin and docknickerbocker . Are you still working on it?
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Post by Admin on Jan 9, 2016 16:13:52 GMT -5
i haven't contacted him in a while, i'll do so now.
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